
Is it true, as
Momus
suggests, that there are "few tales which would not be improved by the
addition of the phrase 'suddenly, a shot rang out'"? Decide for
yourself as we alter the opening lines of . . .
THE RAZOR'S EDGE by
W. Somerset Maugham
I have never begun a novel with more misgiving. Suddenly, a shot rings out.
[Thanks to June for the suggestion!]